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Sunday, February 2, 2014

Research Paper Draft

My NHD draft is work in progress and definitely has potential. I'm confident that it addresses the necessary topics needed to analyze my topic and that I have the right sources but I'm not sure that they are coming together smoothly. I feel like what I have is an outline with introducing and concluding sentences at the end of each topic/paragraph. I definitely think I need to work on the finer things in my paper. The organization was easy because of the outline but let's face it, words are hard.

There two main things I need help on and that's the quotations and the overall flow of the paper. After reading it, the paper felt a little choppy. I think those aspects need a bit more attention after further review. I think the rest of the paper works well besides those two points and I will continue to refine it for the final draft.  
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  1. Sophie CFebruary 2, 2014 at 3:23 PM

    Jacob, I also need help with the flow of my paper. I am glad to see you feel confident about your draft though. Way to stay focused!

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